This post is my persuasive writing about having a boxing arena at school.
Wednesday, August 7, 2019
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Kia Ora Kingston,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added why you want a boxing arena. But maybe next time you could add a explanation on why you want a boxing arena and also add more reasons because you go to school to learn but I like your post overall.
Hi Kingston, I think your post is creative. I like how you added in why we should have a boxing arena. you could check that you have full stops in the right place, maybe you could tell us more about why we need a boxing arena, also who would be our coach and who would take care of us?. hope to see another one of your posts.
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