This the things I did in the holidays
Wednesday, October 16, 2019
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Hi Kingston, It's Mark from St. Bernadette's School.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added details about what you did, and what was happening It was really.
The fighting reminded me of me and my sister, because sometimes we get mad at each other and fight.
Maybe you could add more information about the description on what you're gonna be showing us.
Kind Regards
Mark
Hey Kingston it is Taylor
ReplyDeleteI like how you put lots of detial about what you did in the holidays.
I also have been to aran park and saw the kea, it was scarey looking at its claws.
It could be very cool If you fineshed your writing instead of radeley haveing what you like on page three?
bye
From Taylor