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Thursday, November 21, 2019

In the weekends

This week . Miss lee asked us to write a fabulous recount  about our weekend .We had to add  all the descriptive  tools we have learnt. 
verbs adverbs nouns metaphors and alliteration and adjectives and similes   


I chose  to write about  me and family  going to Kaiapoi and then we to KFC.




1 comment:

  1. Hi Kingston
    I like how you tilted it in the story.
    I also like how you did some pictures.
    can you make it more clear for us to read it
    from Robert

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