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Tuesday, May 12, 2020

The king of the castle and the rascal

this was about robbers trying to get the gold.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kingston, I like the way you were able to use similes and "wow" words in your story. It made the story more easier for me to picture. I look forward to your final copy.
    Mr Matai

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